tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4180154166609032880.post5022379866367419029..comments2023-02-11T06:28:56.339-06:00Comments on The Literary Rock Star: Observatory -- a fridayflashlitrockhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13647103140113105609noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4180154166609032880.post-34977796938213414432010-01-20T15:38:11.142-06:002010-01-20T15:38:11.142-06:00I like how the priest is doing a little searching ...I like how the priest is doing a little searching of his own. <br /><br />Not much of a comment, but I liked it quite a bit and it made me feel.. relaxed and curious. Very nicely done.CJ Hodges MacFarlanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16833789408143274185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4180154166609032880.post-80432480049367286562010-01-20T12:54:31.271-06:002010-01-20T12:54:31.271-06:00Interesting story and concept. It was a good read....Interesting story and concept. It was a good read.Eric J. Krausehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05774468607814244185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4180154166609032880.post-69998844473273222002010-01-15T21:51:41.301-06:002010-01-15T21:51:41.301-06:00I adore your penchant for wordiness and I love dia...I adore your penchant for wordiness and I love dialogue and this served me on both accounts. I could see the stars and the void, and a smooth voice speaking an opinion of faith over facts...I hope I'm close. It was like plunging my nose into a bouquet of flowers and trying to determine what I was smelling all at once because it is all delicious. :)Carrie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05093923008179106837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4180154166609032880.post-16419775652278718762010-01-15T11:56:41.077-06:002010-01-15T11:56:41.077-06:00Very good first paragraph...arouses curiosity.
Th...Very good first paragraph...arouses curiosity.<br /><br />The story, while heavy on dialogue, unfolds at a good pace and construction.<br /><br />And interesting that Heather can confess to someone who doesn't judge one way or the other.<br /><br />Welcome back.Marisa Birnshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17945909737147497606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4180154166609032880.post-32404290819102291222010-01-14T21:48:32.416-06:002010-01-14T21:48:32.416-06:00Interesting, bleak, a little depressing, and thoug...Interesting, bleak, a little depressing, and thought-provoking. Almost exactly what I'd expect from you. ;-) Nice work, and welcome back to fridayflash.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com