tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4180154166609032880.post6370182511943757120..comments2023-02-11T06:28:56.339-06:00Comments on The Literary Rock Star: Demands #fridayflashlitrockhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13647103140113105609noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4180154166609032880.post-9043028394343602182010-05-19T11:47:02.494-05:002010-05-19T11:47:02.494-05:00What a perverse love story. You captured these cha...What a perverse love story. You captured these characters so well that I really believed in them. Well done.Cat Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14160039271069426174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4180154166609032880.post-79104532566399401142010-05-16T14:48:53.223-05:002010-05-16T14:48:53.223-05:00Wow, excellent writing. I sort of wanted to shake ...Wow, excellent writing. I sort of wanted to shake them both a couple of times, but that's because you wrote them so well.<br /><br />Well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4180154166609032880.post-28913319108682313032010-05-16T10:39:24.682-05:002010-05-16T10:39:24.682-05:00I loved the description of the crime scene. The ma...I loved the description of the crime scene. The man's passiveness was maddening, at odds with the woman's assertiveness - it was hard to imagine a good end. Her turning off the light was a brilliant stroke. Great writing.Mark Kerstetterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13307987573435067415noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4180154166609032880.post-63321862125891826202010-05-15T10:06:12.702-05:002010-05-15T10:06:12.702-05:00A very well written piece, "bruise on the wor...A very well written piece, "bruise on the world" was indeed glorious. I did sort of want to slap the pair of them though!mazzz in Leedshttp://mazzz-in-leeds.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4180154166609032880.post-79430486042526601192010-05-14T10:40:41.756-05:002010-05-14T10:40:41.756-05:00First time I've come to your work I think and ...First time I've come to your work I think and feel well rewarded for doing so.<br /><br /> "In this light, all faint grey-blue tones like a heavy bruise on the world," is a great line.<br /><br />Thanks, I'm coming back for more.<br />Marc NashSulci Collectivehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4180154166609032880.post-59507191383189872322010-05-14T04:33:32.144-05:002010-05-14T04:33:32.144-05:00How awful. (Not your writing-- your writing is rea...How awful. (Not your writing-- your writing is really very good.) But such a situation. Such pathetic sadness. I like this story, I think you did it justice, but I hate the characters and their pretend happy ending. (So much emotion means it's very well written indeed!)<br /><br />One typo here: "I I think it over as I watch her face turn up to mine..."Jenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01425418200940737247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4180154166609032880.post-41198453175499166412010-05-13T22:07:13.711-05:002010-05-13T22:07:13.711-05:00From that really good first sentence, your story k...From that really good first sentence, your story keeps one reading and wanting to know more about this extraordinary strange and deadly love.<br /><br />Descriptive prose was really done well.Marisa Birnshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17945909737147497606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4180154166609032880.post-68308410031213694992010-05-13T21:44:04.136-05:002010-05-13T21:44:04.136-05:00Best bit of prose I've seen from you in a whil...Best bit of prose I've seen from you in a while, which is saying quite a bit because your prose is always solid. Well done, Matt.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4180154166609032880.post-46270023484759770032010-05-13T21:40:03.780-05:002010-05-13T21:40:03.780-05:00BOOM. And my mind made that final shot heard. This...BOOM. And my mind made that final shot heard. This was a glorious masterpiece of grit, love, and wow. You left so much out and it made so much more sense. I'm astonished by this one. You are right, it is the best one. Might even top that two strangers in the night one I'll never forget. <br /><br />Love your work, and really look forward to reading yours every week.Carrie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05093923008179106837noreply@blogger.com