tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4180154166609032880.post8063061675840197350..comments2023-02-11T06:28:56.339-06:00Comments on The Literary Rock Star: Nighttime Interruption #fridayflashlitrockhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13647103140113105609noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4180154166609032880.post-995330713231752902010-05-06T07:44:38.087-05:002010-05-06T07:44:38.087-05:00The story seems sound. The people are like birds o...The story seems sound. The people are like birds or something? Different than your usual writing Matt.Carrie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05093923008179106837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4180154166609032880.post-29567176838627133682010-05-01T01:06:52.525-05:002010-05-01T01:06:52.525-05:00I liked this!
If you don't mind one small sug...I liked this!<br /><br />If you don't mind one small suggestion, you might drop a couple small hints in the beginning. <br /><br />I especially liked the part about the mother having an egg. That was sweet.Cat Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14160039271069426174noreply@blogger.com